15. Unfulfilled Fantasy, chapter posted 8/6/06

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Unfulfilled Fantasy — Page 6
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Veronica’s Commentary

Chomping-fish-Maishul delights me, he turned out so cute with his little cheeks sticking out ;.;

I remember reading a “How to make comics” book once and I read about some things that you really shouldn’t do in terms of paneling.. and whenever I look at panel twelve, I keep thinking back to that book. EACH TIME. It says that you shouldn’t make just the head of the character invade the panel.. because it’ll look like a floating head.. and I noticed that with Sandy after a while and really hate that panel now.

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28 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #81067

Sandy’s beautiful…….:P

Mike’s lucky. :D

Kenny August 24, 2010, 10:47 AM EST.

Comment ID #109213

It’s nice to see the characters sit like cats, once in a while.


or sit like dogs. whatever.

Lyucs October 22, 2010, 11:08 AM EST.

Comment ID #150632

The way to a mans heart is through his stomach.
Go for it sandy XD

bluesub6 March 7, 2011, 7:00 AM EST.

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