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55. Back and Forth, page posted 6/9/10

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Back and Forth — Page 24
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Author Commentary

Nothing does better subtle product placement than Goremaster Vorecoaster 3000.

Jasmine is doing her best! The little trooper.

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168 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #40507

5 Minutes, thats a new record.

Oh and nice shirt, GAP exists there as well.
PAY ATTENTION TO YOUR GIRL PAULO!!

Lycinder June 9, 2010, 3:00 AM EST.

Comment ID #40543

Those three in the front from right to left look like Tess Mike and David ……..

Kavukamari June 9, 2010, 3:31 AM EST.

Comment ID #40739

To describe panel three in full detail….

Jasmine took a piece of popcorn and lifted it towards her mouth slowly. “This is what older boys like, right?” she thought. “They like sexy. I can be sexy…” With a sideways glance at Paulo, she licked her fingers clean of the butter on the kernel and then licked her lips seductively.

Now to describe panel four.

Paulo’s nose disappears for a few seconds. Paulo has become uber bishie. He doesn’t see Jasmine licking her fingers as if it were a *****.

Gabriel Kaxbe June 9, 2010, 10:53 AM EST.

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