15. Unfulfilled Fantasy, chapter posted 8/6/06

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Unfulfilled Fantasy — Page 1

Taeshi’s Commentary On This Page

If you didn’t think this couldn’t get any more emo.. then again, I’m sure you guys probably wouldn’t have known about the upcoming emo until it got to that point, but totally expect it. Fur shuuuureeee.

Lucy’s eyes on the first panel bug me.. but I notice that whenever I start off a comic, I always make the characters talking with semi-serious faces.. as in default and more.. “proportionate,” rather than silly and exaggerated. Hope that makes sense!

I am terribly sorry about the quality of the page. Drawing-wise, I’m happy with it, but it looks very smudgy. At the time, I didn’t know how to get rid of the smudges (I’d rescan and get the same) and it was only after a while that I found out how to make the pages look cleaner. Isn’t it silly that I just need to put a blank page behind the comic? Then it scans all cleanly? The majority of the smudges are because it’s pressed against the comic page behind it.

Anyway, TIME FOR THE DRAMA TO BEGIN. Mike’s expression on the seventeenth panel is win. I seem to like many expressions that take place in that panel. Ahah.

7 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #1335

LOOK AT HOW THE CAST MOVES ONTO THE WRONG LEG IN THE TENTH PANEL.

NICE GOING LIL

NICE GOIN

Taeshi March 14, 2010, 1:19 PM EST.

Comment ID #2458

I AM LOVING THIS COMIC!!!!!!!!

Meg April 4, 2010, 1:41 AM EST.

Comment ID #5755

taeshi…….i can barely draw stick figures, dont b so hard on urself

bored as hell April 19, 2010, 7:54 AM EST.

Comment ID #20277

You can draw stick figures? Can you teach me?

this guy May 11, 2010, 11:39 PM EST.

Comment ID #20356

>-}o

UNIT2960 May 12, 2010, 2:28 AM EST.

Comment ID #20358

That’s how you make a stick figure.

UNIT2960 May 12, 2010, 2:29 AM EST.

Comment ID #21058

Lol.

Icaras May 13, 2010, 7:44 AM EST.

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