15. Unfulfilled Fantasy, chapter posted 8/6/06

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Unfulfilled Fantasy — Page 3
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Veronica’s Commentary

Hey, it’s Lily! We haven’t seen her in a long time.. she definitely becomes pretty damn useful for dramatic and emo scenes like this.. so yeah. I particularly like how I made her so.. assertive and taunting. Pretty much how she’s meant to be.. and in the side-story, she was the bloody QUEEN of doing that. Lucy would go into a tangent and Lily would spout out something that would make Lucy all “.. *Angst at realization*”.. goodness.

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Cuddle Bear May 19, 2010, 12:38 AM EST.

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this chapter makes me cry for some reason every time

Razle dazzle baby WOO May 3, 2011, 4:30 AM EST.

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Wrong foot again Taeshi but it only bothers me a lil bit :smirk:

SarashiTheCat April 28, 2012, 1:37 AM EST.

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