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15. Unfulfilled Fantasy, chapter posted 8/6/06

Page 3 of 14

Unfulfilled Fantasy — Page 3
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Taeshi’s Commentary On This Page

Hey, it’s Lily! We haven’t seen her in a long time.. she definitely becomes pretty damn useful for dramatic and emo scenes like this.. so yeah. I particularly like how I made her so.. assertive and taunting. Pretty much how she’s meant to be.. and in the side-story, she was the bloody QUEEN of doing that. Lucy would go into a tangent and Lily would spout out something that would make Lucy all “.. *Angst at realization*”.. goodness.

You can also see the pen I was using totally sucked. MOVING ON.

12 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #5757

lol, i KNEW IT!

bored as hell April 19, 2010, 7:59 AM EST.

Comment ID #6062

…..How old IS Lily anyway?

Jay April 20, 2010, 2:37 AM EST.

Comment ID #6834

Yeah.

UNIT2960 April 22, 2010, 12:54 AM EST.

Comment ID #7064

WHO THE FUCK IS SANDY? she be mentioned earlier… but WHO?!?!?!!?

MacGyver Adrian Caboose April 22, 2010, 10:51 AM EST.

Comment ID #7857

mikie’s old boyfriend

bored April 24, 2010, 8:22 AM EST.

Comment ID #7859

How old are you, bored?

SuitCase April 24, 2010, 8:23 AM EST.

Comment ID #8502

Sandy is Mike’s ex- girlfriend. The rest of the story becomes very interesting because of Sandy’s return. I kind of hate Sandy, to tell the truth…

Le Biologist April 25, 2010, 7:02 PM EST.

Comment ID #9075

Damn you, Sandy.

UNIT2960 April 27, 2010, 2:03 AM EST.

Comment ID #20283

DAMN YOU ALL!

jk

this guy May 11, 2010, 11:45 PM EST.

Comment ID #20363

you better be. >=(

UNIT2960 May 12, 2010, 2:30 AM EST.

Comment ID #23819

Flashback!

Cuddle Bear May 19, 2010, 12:38 AM EST.

Comment ID #78438

Lily is 7 last time I heard

Randomness August 19, 2010, 6:47 AM EST.

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