Bittersweet Candy Bowl

117. Good Enough, page posted 1/4/23

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Author commentary

Veronica: Paulo is such an unreliable narrator that he won’t even admit to the READER that he’s actually had a crush on James for months!!! This was very perfectly-planned!!!!

(No seriously, I think if I had a chapter that involved Paulo specifically working at burger-tron with James around, like what happened in Everyday Life, there might have been an inkling. For a person very overt about his feelings, there’s some feelings he would rather keep close to his chest)

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Comment ID #22900

Awww daisy!! ?

Brittany ann

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I want to be encouraged by Daisy’s words, but we can’t see her eyes…

kurris

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Hmm, maybe they could make an open relationship work ? Daisy likes gossiping about crushes, Paulo always seems to really like more than one person at a time, ect.

Fiver

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If you don’t talk about your feelings then they’re not real, right? …Right??

PaddleBoat

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Good old Daisy, looking out for her friends.

SCD

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Poor Paulo. The poor kid still doesn’t feel like he matters. His mom leaving is a wound he stil needs a lot of help healing. Someone get this poor kid some therapy. Heck, get them ALL some therapy, they need it. Abbey needs BETTER therapy because his obviously hasn’t helped as much as it should after several years.

DIDwithme