Bittersweet Candy Bowl

87. Boy Toy, page posted 5/8/15

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Author commentary

Veronica: This page was originally a lot more sappy, while Souppy and I were thinking of different ways to get the point across, I blurted out what Rachel’d say to ease the tension. Souppy thought it was perfect and he really wanted me to write it in SO I DID.

Thanks for reading!!! See you next chapter!

Reader comments

Comment ID #298695

i fucking love rachel

best dog

purrcatory May 8, 2015, 1:03 PM EDT.

Comment ID #298725

this ended on a rather happy note. :3 at first i was really annoyed with paulos attitude in the chapter and didnt think i would enjoy it at all, but the end saved the chapter for me :3

Terry May 8, 2015, 3:09 PM EDT.

Comment ID #298730

I like that it ends on an ambiguous note. He’s not sure one way or another, which is realistic, because he’s only just started being open to the possibility that he could be anything but 100% heterosexual. I really liked this chapter. One of the things that always bugged me about Paulo was his super homophobic behavior and being aggressive and callous to assert his masculinity. This had a lot of good character development for him, and I regardless of if he ends up bisexual or heterosexual, I hope we see this side of him further explored in the future. Great chapter, Taeshi ^_^

Floweramon May 8, 2015, 3:43 PM EDT.