Bittersweet Candy Bowl

79. Critical Hit, page posted 10/3/13

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Comment ID #260871

Sue doesn’t look so happy here…you don’t suppose, it might be guilt do you?
She does look a little guilty—especially the way she’s glancing at Mike. :

Shibuyah-kun October 3, 2013, 1:03 PM EDT.

Comment ID #260884

OH MY GOD. Really guys, you don’t know that Sue is having difficulty thinking of how to interpret the art? Her quizical look and raised palm toward her lip with furrowed brows, looking over to Mike to possibly glance at what he’s written down, the way she responds with “Yeah…” When Daisy says it’s amazing, it’s obvious she’s not an expert at critiquing. Which is odd, since she directed the play, so one would assume she’d be good at the arts in general.

MonsieurWTF October 3, 2013, 1:17 PM EDT.

Comment ID #260923

The art looks a bit… different here with Sue… Like she finally got her own special/specific detailed design with her features, like with Daisy and her big, bubbly eyes. Her eyes are more oval-like and her face is a bit longer than others. Makes her look more mature compared to the others.
There’s an improvement with hands, too. Even though, they’re often strategically hidden, like in this page for instance, progress is still being made whenever they’re shown.

It’s nice. The art is gradually progressing every chapter, even every page. Keep up the good work, Taeshi! c:

Naoki October 3, 2013, 4:17 PM EDT.