Bittersweet Candy Bowl

Intermission: On Call, page posted 8/26/22

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Author commentary

Veronica: Thanks for reading!!!!

I enjoyed exploring this sequence. The chapters ahead will do all of the heavy lifting to make this chapter more of an extra than a must-read extra, of course - but at least you all know how it went down!

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Ren

The parallel Sandy hits with what Mike said to Lucy just before this really hits.

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Lolol she cheats and dumps and still gets the first say in the relationship

Mike, you didn’t learn a thing

nalem

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You blew it boy. You really blew it.

This was a nice chapter.

SCD

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Damn it

Haruhi Hatake

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Good job Taeshi

The Orangewalled

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Bad ending :(

Goobis Woobis

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Aw shit that’s depressing ;-;

cottoncandy.x

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I’ve got no sympathy for him

Para-sight

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This chapter HIT. dammmmmn

Sai Santoso-Miller

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he really need to learn to let her go

adzrobinz

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Thanks again for sharing this chapter with us! It was really nice and helpful, and I don’t think it was spoonfeedy at all. There are many visual details to examine, and so much dialogue to read into.

hazel