Bittersweet Candy Bowl

95. Love Again, page posted 11/4/16

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Author commentary

Veronica: At one point in the dialogue revision, Souppy had Abbey say “don’t be silly, I’m sure he deserved every word” and I was like “YIKES MAN” because Abbey’s not a weirdo gaslighter like that. “Don’t be silly” isn’t that horrible of a thing to say generally, but with someone as serious as Abbey, it takes on a whole new abusive streak. And that’s totally not Abbey :l

Oliver: Yeah, a lot of this chapter was about tweaking the balance for a lot of the tension and conflict underlying all these characters. It’s a tough life for Abbey.

Also we are at Youmacon! In Detroit! Right now! Go!!

Comments from around the web

I honestly have no problems with this page, Daisy realizes there’s a problem she needs to correct, Mike suggested she talk to him about it and Abbey is on permanent glare mode. Houston… We have no problems~~

Facebook: Nanano Takahoshi November 4, 2016

Waiting for Abbey to fuck himself <3

Facebook: Fabian Arce Mora November 4, 2016

She finally realize what she did to deserve him ignoring her. Good but let’s see if she can fix it

Facebook: Kim Estelle Merlos November 4, 2016

Mike’s starting to realize something is up…maybe now that he isn’t distracted by Sandy he’s able to pick up hints better.

Facebook: Matt Madison November 4, 2016

i know that look on mike…he’s going to go tell paulo that he should stop ignoring daisy and talk to her…..then paulo’s going to end up in even more trouble with abraham ( i refuse to call him abby now cause he’s a giant phallic object) for not only trying to talk to daisy but for ignoring her as well. this is just a no win situation for paulo.

Facebook: Sierra Luna Brown November 4, 2016