Bittersweet Candy Bowl

95. Love Again, page posted 11/4/16

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Author commentary

Veronica: At one point in the dialogue revision, Souppy had Abbey say “don’t be silly, I’m sure he deserved every word” and I was like “YIKES MAN” because Abbey’s not a weirdo gaslighter like that. “Don’t be silly” isn’t that horrible of a thing to say generally, but with someone as serious as Abbey, it takes on a whole new abusive streak. And that’s totally not Abbey :l

Oliver: Yeah, a lot of this chapter was about tweaking the balance for a lot of the tension and conflict underlying all these characters. It’s a tough life for Abbey.

Also we are at Youmacon! In Detroit! Right now! Go!!

Comments from around the web

Well, Daisy, you must be firm then if you really want to clear up stuff. But of course you can’t! I mean, you couldn’t be brave enough to buy a rose to Abbey and ask him by yourself to be together again! You only stayed there and watched how Paulo bought it instead of you. Hmm, maybe this will be good for character growth.

Please, Mike, if you ever ask Paulo what Daisy and him talked over the phone, let them solve it! You can give Paulo a bit of advice, but don’t step in, please, please pleaaase!!

Facebook: Leeveey Aislinn November 4, 2016

Wow Mike that is really mature to say Sandy will be proud. Abby not so mature, I know he hates Paulo to the bone but Paulo is Daisy’s friend. Even if you hate your partners friends you shouldn’t act like that

Facebook: Saskia Roeffen November 4, 2016

Mike’s starting to realize something is up…maybe now that he isn’t distracted by Sandy he’s able to pick up hints better.

Facebook: Matt Madison November 4, 2016

I just can’t with Daisy.

“Paulo hates me! Well I might have said some mean things to him but he’s ignoring me!” Seriously?

Daisy you didn’t have a minor tiff! You cut him down hard and didn’t give him a chance to explain! That’s not something you can be all best buddies about the next day. And if she thought that, she’s stupid. A true friend wouldn’t treat them like that.

Abby can still kick rocks. He knows he’s a good part of the reason Paulo is keeping his distance, mostly for his safety and health. Why is Abby still so mad? He should be happy the “womanizer” is away from his pure Daisy.

Glad Mike is getting a clue. Hopefully he offers support to Paulo if he finds out what happened.

Facebook: Kim Toney November 4, 2016

Can’t wait for this to blow up in abbey’s face. Can’t stand that violent fuck

Facebook: Matias Welz November 4, 2016