95. Love Again, page posted 11/30/16

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Love Again — Page 16

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Veronica: hahahahahahaah

This page and the one before it went through SO many revisions because the sequence is packed with information. If you alter one bit of dialogue, the entire jenga puzzle falls apart. Souppy tried to remove Paulo bringing up the con specifically in the previous page, but it unavoidably messed up Daisy’s reaction in the next page. For a while Souppy wanted Daisy to DECIPHER what Paulo implied, but the line was always just too vague for Daisy to figure out convincingly. So there was so much writing and rewriting and at one point.. WELL WE MADE IT. It’s there.

This page was just a demon when it came to the balancing act of characters infodumping realistically.

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Bam, there it is finally

Tumblr: hoodratrace November 30, 2016

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