Bittersweet Candy Bowl

95. Love Again, page posted 11/30/16

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Author commentary

Veronica: hahahahahahaah

This page and the one before it went through SO many revisions because the sequence is packed with information. If you alter one bit of dialogue, the entire jenga puzzle falls apart. Souppy tried to remove Paulo bringing up the con specifically in the previous page, but it unavoidably messed up Daisy’s reaction in the next page. For a while Souppy wanted Daisy to DECIPHER what Paulo implied, but the line was always just too vague for Daisy to figure out convincingly. So there was so much writing and rewriting and at one point.. WELL WE MADE IT. It’s there.

This page was just a demon when it came to the balancing act of characters infodumping realistically.

Comments from around the web

FINALLY!!! THANK YOU PAULO!! Yeah you walk away Abbey

Facebook: Tiana Alexandria Rutherford November 30, 2016

Also dare I say it? The description of the writing process for this chapter just keeps making me think the words ‘Disaster Dominoes’ over and over

Facebook: Jan Gundle November 30, 2016

Paulo might be enjoying this a bit too much but then again so am I. It’s nice to see that even after all that Mike still seems concerned for Paulo. As for Abbey, I understand all characters have flaws, it’s good character writing, but for now I can’t forgive him or find myself liking him because he isn’t sorry for what he’s done. I disagree with violence unless it’s in self defence and he’s still trying to justify what he did to Paulo.

Facebook: Katie Nelson November 30, 2016

God damnit this whole thing is one giant train wreck yet I can’t look away. can’t wait for more :x

Twitter: AlyssaDaemon November 30, 2016

all this abbey hate is crazy holy heck. blah blah a few thoughts on this.
i think the biggest thing a lot of ppl are forgettin is that the cast are teens, might as well still refer to them as kids even bc they are still growing?? kids learn from mistakes, you have to do stupid things to learn from them first so the amount of ppl saying paulo is an innocent baby and that abbey is basically satan incarnated is baffling. i think one of the key things to remember here is that abbey DOESNT WANT TO BE LIKE THIS. this is what weve seen out of his internal struggles, he does not want to be like his father in the least bit. paulo never gives him a break with this, always pushing him to his limits and thats not a good thing for someone trying to recover. also, abbey is a fighter n def fights for his friends n what he believes in even if those views might be wrong and tho […]

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