Bittersweet Candy Bowl

95. Love Again, page posted 11/30/16

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Author commentary

Veronica: hahahahahahaah

This page and the one before it went through SO many revisions because the sequence is packed with information. If you alter one bit of dialogue, the entire jenga puzzle falls apart. Souppy tried to remove Paulo bringing up the con specifically in the previous page, but it unavoidably messed up Daisy’s reaction in the next page. For a while Souppy wanted Daisy to DECIPHER what Paulo implied, but the line was always just too vague for Daisy to figure out convincingly. So there was so much writing and rewriting and at one point.. WELL WE MADE IT. It’s there.

This page was just a demon when it came to the balancing act of characters infodumping realistically.

Comments from around the web

Idk why is everyone is getting mad at Paulo, he’s the only one that knows what’s up tbh and has enough balls to call Mike out. He’s the only one that noticed that Lucy doesn’t want to see Mike, and did the group forget about how he drove her to(assumingely) try and kill herself?? And now he ain’t saying shit like nothing happened?? That’s BS. And I hope that the bathroom chocking gets brought up, Abbey should apologize for that :1

And Daisy needs to stfu, she shouldn’t be saying shit to a close friend that she pushed away, besides she’s only protecting Mike because she still has a huge crush on him e.e

Tumblr: hoodratrace November 30, 2016

I… Is it okay to be laughing this hard?? Oh my goodness XD

Facebook: Nanano Takahoshi November 30, 2016

…so this is the chapter of sudden twists? we think we have it figured out what the title means but then something else gets fucked

Facebook: Sarah Hamercheck November 30, 2016

Here it comes!

Facebook: Talia Nightingale November 30, 2016

Oh good I can start liking Daisy again. Also, doesn’t Abbey realize Paulo was acting the way he was because Abbey choked him at the con? Goodness. I’m really proud of Daisy for deciding to see what was wrong with Paulo though.

Facebook: Kayla Bacos November 30, 2016

…lately? What is Abbey referring to, ‘lately’?

Facebook: Jan Gundle November 30, 2016

Also dare I say it? The description of the writing process for this chapter just keeps making me think the words ‘Disaster Dominoes’ over and over

Facebook: Jan Gundle November 30, 2016

Haven’t even read the page and i see Abbey’s fearful face and it is satisfying as hell

Facebook: Kirk Findlay November 30, 2016