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12. Confrontation, chapter posted 1/15/10

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Author Commentary

I keep thinking to myself that it’s a cliche to have a character not realising that someone is sneaking up towards them.. considering Lucy did that to the goon before.. but the funny thing is Lucy has a terrible sense of hearing so she genuinely wouldn’t have heard the guy coming towards her durrdurr

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Comment ID #577

Pshaw Lucy! If you gonna put someone down, make sure they stay down.

Moddy Auld January 30, 2010, 2:03 PM EST.

Comment ID #579

wow i really love this action sequence probably seeing as it is fairly detailed in the injuries

seadogs123 January 30, 2010, 6:15 PM EST.

Comment ID #180344

well thats a muy tai knee if i ever seen one……

Zeo September 4, 2011, 2:42 AM EST.

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