Bittersweet Candy Bowl

95. Love Again, page posted 11/4/16

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Author commentary

Veronica: At one point in the dialogue revision, Souppy had Abbey say “don’t be silly, I’m sure he deserved every word” and I was like “YIKES MAN” because Abbey’s not a weirdo gaslighter like that. “Don’t be silly” isn’t that horrible of a thing to say generally, but with someone as serious as Abbey, it takes on a whole new abusive streak. And that’s totally not Abbey :l

Oliver: Yeah, a lot of this chapter was about tweaking the balance for a lot of the tension and conflict underlying all these characters. It’s a tough life for Abbey.

Also we are at Youmacon! In Detroit! Right now! Go!!

Comments from around the web

She finally realize what she did to deserve him ignoring her. Good but let’s see if she can fix it

Facebook: Kim Estelle Merlos November 4, 2016

Wow Mike that is really mature to say Sandy will be proud. Abby not so mature, I know he hates Paulo to the bone but Paulo is Daisy’s friend. Even if you hate your partners friends you shouldn’t act like that

Facebook: Saskia Roeffen November 4, 2016

Mike’s starting to realize something is up…maybe now that he isn’t distracted by Sandy he’s able to pick up hints better.

Facebook: Matt Madison November 4, 2016

OH boo fucking hoo Daisy, you know EXACTLY why he’s ignoring you and you deserve it.

Cry on your thug’s shoulder maybe.

Facebook: Robert W. Uthoff November 4, 2016

Can’t wait for this to blow up in abbey’s face. Can’t stand that violent fuck

Facebook: Matias Welz November 4, 2016